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Suppressed by the enforcer,
Blinded by lies.
No more wings for the young,
No good will rise.

Ignore the plague,
Feed the snake.
Tear the feathers,
Never wake.

They do as they please,
They're all but fake.
The birds now die,
And it all begins to break.
©2009 ~veXchu
:iconvexchu:

Author's Comments

Poem about people who do nothing and watch the world rot from a political standpoint. The bird is the young generation of this world. We're so stupid and uneducated.

:)

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:iconone-of-my-lies:
I really liked this, it's short, but it gets across the meaning in a pleasant sounding original rhyme scheme :)

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Sometimes life is like a pair of pants; there are always some stains that can't be washed away.
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"One Love Peace!"
:iconneo-kieran:
I liked this one, you had a good rhyme and the words worked. Good job.

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Can you absolutely swear that you wear completely unemotional when faced with the death of someone close to you.

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